Passive= uhmm..? Manaregeneration into Healthregeneration
Shields on back= can't be critted from behind
Shields on hands= Nautilus passive
Shields in front= rejects skillshots -movement speed
W=Rammus W+Sona E
E=conespell spitting out dirt or somthing and blinding+slowing
R= Some kind of Sion ult
if you know what I mean look at this guy he is has the perfect look of an good tank support
By the way, which faction does he belong?
But they lack one serious thing - the same 95% projects on deviantart have - mechanical re-thinking.
This tank is like Rammus+Braum hybrid. Spirit support = Karma. Grave robber - some kind of Fiora. Dool admiral is like Maokai/Orianna/something and Rock Marksman really do not look appealing.
LoL lore is pretty straightforward. Key to succeeding in such project is to fit the character into existing overall concept (demacia, noxus, ionia, freliord, you got the drift) and do not force new content. Mechanically support it and try to be as cool as possible about it.
Also, do not be afraid to use existing content, modify, and fit it there.
Hathora Du Couteau
“the Hoofer of Demise”
Occupation: Dancer of House Du Couteau
FRIENDS: Cassiopeia – Katarina – Talon
RIVALS: Jarvan IV – Garen – Lux
Attack Power: 6
Defense Power: 3
Ability Power: 7
HEALTH: 440 (+80)
HEALTH REGEN: 6.85 (+0.55)
MANA REGEN: N/A
RANGE: 125 (Melee)
ATTACK DAMAGE: 55 (+3.5
ATTACK SPEED: 0.670 (+2.75)
ARMOR: 23 (+3.5)
MAGIC RESISTANCE: 30 (+1.25)
MOVEMENT SPEED: 350
She is one of the daughters of General Du Couteau and a sister of two of the most fearsome top killers in Noxus Katarina Du Couteau and Cassiopeia Du Couteau. They’re family is known for they’re killing strategy and thirst for blood & battle but just like Cassiopeia before she was turned to a human-lamia hybrid, she has no talent in battle combats and lacks of killer instinct. On the age of 6 she discovered that she loves to dance and trained to be one of the dancers in Noxus. After how many years she became the best dancer and most requested performer in there town because of her grace, beauty, poise and attitude while dancing but still she couldn’t get her father’s sympathy because her father’s attention is on the two most celebrated member of the household, Katarina and Cassiopeia.
When she turned 18 she asked Katarina to train her in battle strategy and combat but she couldn’t do it, she can’t hardly hold any of the swords and spears, she can’t aim bulls-eye in archery, and she can’t even shoot a gun. Hathora gave up on learning any battle strategies. While she is sitting in the fountain some blacksmith came over to her and said “Hello, months ago I saw you performing at the stage and I was amazed by your grace while dancing.” then Hathora replied “Well thank you Mister but still it is not enough for me to get my father’s attention.” and she continued by saying “I tried becoming a swordsman and spearman but swords and spears are too heavy for me, I tried to be an archer but I cannot aim, I also tried to be a gunner but I can’t even pull a trigger, and definitely I cannot be a mage because I don’t have any magic power.” then the blacksmith told her “You don’t need to be someone you’re not.” then he smiled to her and continues to talk “Just be a dancer, but in a unique way. I will give you a gift tomorrow just wait.” then the blacksmith left. The next day she came back to the fountain where she sits yesterday and waited for the blacksmith to come, then after an hour the blacksmith showed up with something on his back. “Where is the gift you will give me?” Hathora asked, then the blacksmith replied “Here it is.” The blacksmith took the thing behind his back. Then Hathora asked ‘What is it?” the blacksmith replied “This is a Sphere Blade. Light as a stick but sharp as a sword. Specially made for you” then Hathora replied immediately “But I already told you I have no talent in fighting.” then he whispered “Remember what I told you yesterday, just be a dancer. Let this blade be the extension of your body and make the battlefield be your stage. This weapon will be your protection from harm.” then he just stood up and left. Since then, everywhere Hathora goes she always have the Sphere Blade hanging on her back.
A month past since the day Hathora receive the gift from the blacksmith she went to the forest outside the Noxus to relax and get some fresh air but the Demacian Army led by one of the Generals in Demacia captured her. She had been tortured to death by Demacian Soldiers and after that she just let them laying in the ground. She saw her Sphere Blade on the top of the table, she stood up and pick up her weapon. Hathora’s mind became confused and her heart fulfilled with hatred. She closed her eyes and felt her vessels and veins running through the weapon’s blade. One soldier came to check her but when he open the door a sphere like sword cut his throat and bleed him to death. She went outside the room and all of the soldiers saw her. They draw their swords and attacked her but Hathora dodged all of the attacks and swing her Sphere Blade like she is dancing with poise and grace and the battlefield became her stage. She killed every last one of the soldiers. When the General came back he saw all of his soldiers laying on the ground breathless. He rushed onto Hathora’s room but she is not there. When the General look back he saw Hathora in the sky covered in blood dashing towards him and in just a second his head just fell off from his body. She came back to Noxus with the head of all the soldiers she killed on a wagon and on the other hand the head of the General. The Noxian soldiers were terrified, shocked and amazed by her skills in combat, then all of a sudden she just blocked out. When she woke up she saw Katarina, Cassiopeia, and Talon sitting beside her bed. Katarina asked “What happen to you?” then she replied “It was a long story to tell.” and smile. After a minute some Noxian soldier came to the room and told them to go outside, and when they came out they saw the Noxian people gathered outside they’re house. Her father General Du Couteau held a party for the come back of her daughter then that night she saw the blacksmith who gave her the weapon, Hathora said “Thank you for everything.” then the blacksmith replied “I told you, you can do it.” then they both smile and Hathora hugged him. Later that night she was recruited as one of the Crimson Elite Member and named her “Hathora, The Hoofer of Demise.” then she decided to join in the League Of Legends and let the enemies taste her wrath in fighting with grace and poise, for pride of Noxus and for her own revenge to the Demacian Army.
“Don’t underestimate me, my moves will bring you to your grave.”
“You will be entertained!”
“Did I scare you?”
“For the Noxus pride!”
“You click, I kill.”
“I’ll cut they’re throat!”
“Hula hoop of death!”
“Stick to the plan!”
“Are you not entertained?”
“I dance, you die.”
“Too sexy to be a killer?”
“You are in bad luck, I am your opponent.”
“Let this battle field be your graveyard.”
“Oohhh…My…Gosh…You stained my clothes with your disgusting blood. You’re dead! Oh I forgot, you already are dead.”
(Passive) FERVOR: When Hathora loses 80% of her total health, she instantly increases her attack damage by 15% and her ability power by 10%.
(Q) BLADE HURL:
Cooldown: 15 / 14 / 13 / 12 / 10
Active: Hathora throws her sphere blade in a line dealing magic damage to all enemies it passes through and when the sphere blade bounces back all champions passes by the blade will be pulled to her.
Magic Damage: 80 / 100 / 130 / 160 / 230 (+50% AP) (+65% AD)
(W) WHIRL EDGE:
Active: Hathora slashes her sphere blade in a circular motion. Instantly dealing magic damage to all enemies near her and slows them for 3 seconds. If she kills a champion using whirl edge, the cooldown of the skill will instantly reset.
Magic Damage: 50 / 80 / 120 / 150 / 190 (+30% AP) (+60% AD)
(E) NOXIAN SWAY:
Active: Hathora swings her sphere blade in a vast line towards her trice damaging all units in front of her. Each swing causes a magic damage and applies grievous wounds for 3 seconds.
Magic Damage Per Hit: 15 / 25 / 35 / 45 / 55 (+40% AP) ( +50% AD)
Maximum Damage To Each Enemy: 45 / 75 / 105 / 135 / 165 (+120% AP) (+135% AD)
(R) THE FINAL DANCE:
Active: Hathora releases five miniature sphere blades orbiting outwards from her in a radius of 300 and she gains 30% movement speed for 10 seconds. Every time a blade passes through champion it deals magic damage. A champion can only be hit five times.
Magic Damage Per Hit: 60 / 90 / 120 (+25% AP) (+35.5% AD)
Maximum Damage To Each Enemy: 300 / 450 / 600 (+250% AP) (+355% AD)
"Can you made one for this? Please Her weapon looks like Tira's weapon from Soul Calibur.
This passive would be like "Titanic Inertia: after x seconds moving in a direction, the next knock up, knock back, fling, grab, root and knock aside will be negated. Stun won't stop his movement, but he won't do anything else while stunned, including changing his direction". I would love to see riot comming out with a tank with that passive. =/
(sorry for my poor english)
More than that I cannot say, I'm not familiar enough with all the new champions (I think latest release before I quit playing was Shyvanna) to pick abilities that's different from the stuff that's already there. The task I was assigned with was to come up with visuals more unique to the game, so that they could be a possible base for new champions. Again, thanks for showing interest =]
I don't feel comfortable giving criticism to someone really talented, but if you were really into this, and you wanted this to actually become a champ, you need to think of Skin possibilities for him, and I can't really see any other than some shell thing, maybe a Samurai?